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sunsets by ~Aeris-Valeria:iconAeris-Valeria:

Categories Photography > Animals, Plants & Nature > Sky

©2006-2009 ~Aeris-Valeria
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heh, first photography ever, so I hope I chose all the right categories. *nods* It just hit me as sorta... peaceful, so I took a picture. *shrugs* tell me if you like it, if you don't, constructive criticism would be appreciated. *smiles* photography beginner, any criticism or tips would be appreciated

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~rena03 May 3, 2006, 12:59:26 AM
its a nice photo hunni for your first try .hmm any tips i can give .well there one when taking a point into prospective like a sun set make sure the angle of the shot is from high prespective as in your looking down at it. as this one is not even close to that it looks fine . you could of zoomed on the sunset so the colours look more peaceful and it reall captures the look of a sunset then. i like it alot though and its pretty good for ya first try hunni.

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hiya its just me robert
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~Aeris-Valeria May 3, 2006, 12:43:27 PM
*smiles* thank you! the thing is I have a terrible camera... it doesn't have a zoom *giggles* now I need a better camera ^_^

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~The Girl Who Continues to Sing at the End of the World~
Ar Tonelico - Melody of Elemia
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~rena03 May 3, 2006, 12:48:14 PM
your most welcome hunni *smiles too* oh okay didnt know then just make the sun look closer to the fore ground then if ya cant zzoom some how do that instead by getting closer your self or by moving the camera at a higher angle

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hiya its just me robert
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~izolas May 3, 2006, 2:26:31 PM
Wow, I wish I was there right now. :P
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~Skylord May 3, 2006, 6:22:45 PM
That's rather pretty, it is. *smiles* Am I correct in assuming the storms have billowed over?

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Make your choice, adventurous Stranger; Click the [link] and bide the danger, Or wonder, 'til it drives you mad, What would have followed if you had.
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~Aeris-Valeria May 4, 2006, 3:52:57 AM
*chuckles* not really, this was taken not half an hour before a major thunderstorm. *smiles* thank you tho

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~The Girl Who Continues to Sing at the End of the World~
Ar Tonelico - Melody of Elemia
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~Aeris-Valeria May 4, 2006, 3:58:00 AM
*laughs* I don't exactly know. There's still a chance for tornadoes, not as great of one tho. We're still in for major thunderstorms so... *shrugs* Thank you for the fav btw ^_^

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~The Girl Who Continues to Sing at the End of the World~
Ar Tonelico - Melody of Elemia
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~Lei22 May 8, 2006, 7:27:37 PM
well this is actually really nice. I would like, however, to see some more contrast and clarity in the photo, however. Perhaps your camera has some settings that would help? Or even editing them in a simple hue/contrast/brightness image editor. Like PHotoshop or the Gimp. a smaller size wouldn't help, either ;) but congrats on your first photography! My first chance was in the middle of winter -_-; lol.

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~kittyasystol May 8, 2006, 9:44:42 PM
It's not a bad shot methinks ^^ But you could've tried not having the photo cut in half by the horizon like that by putting some perspective in it (like *rena03 said), or you could've cropped a bit of the ground away, so most of the focus goes to the sky.

Also, resizing helps a lot, because it's a bit on the blurry side. And oh yeah (this I learned some time ago, it's pretty handy) adding a border makes it look a bit more professional xD Good luck and have fun with future shots!

And always remember that a bad camera doesn't necessarily mean you'll take bad shots :D
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